Writing Historical Fiction


So you want to write historical fiction? Congratulations! Historical fiction is not only fun to read and write, it can be the best way to learn about history as well. Writing historical fiction requires a lot of patience, time, and attention to detail, but there’s nothing more satisfying than bringing the past alive in a story. It’s easy to get overwhelmed, especially during the research stage, but I’m going to break down writing a great historical fiction novel down into three easy steps. You need to research the period, relate to your characters, and respect the differences of the past. These three things are all you need to build a vivid historical novel your readers won’t be able to put down.


RESEARCH


Before you write, make sure you’ve done at least a little research on the period you’ve chosen to set your novel in. You can continue to research as you write, but you’ll need to know basic details about life in the period you’re writing before you can tell the story of someone living that life. My favorite research resources are children’s nonfiction picture books and historical TV and movies. That’s not to say I won’t read adult nonfiction books on a historical period or watch a documentary, but for our purposes as writers, children’s books, television shows and movies are superior, as they will give you visual images to work with. No one wants white room syndrome in a book, and trust me, historical fiction is the one of the genres most plagued by white room syndrome. It can be hard to picture clearly the sights and sounds of a bygone age. It’s definitely a daily struggle for me. Check out your local library or bookstores for historical nonfiction picture books as well as adult books. Children’s books often focus on daily life in history, whereas adult books tend to focus on important political dates. Your novel may deal with important political dates, or it may not, but all historical novels will cover daily life, so I recommend starting there.


My second favorite historical research resource is historical TV shows and movies. Assuming the show or movie is relatively historically accurate, this is one of the best ways to get a good feel for the world your character is inhabiting. If you can visit museums and see real historical landmarks, buildings, and artifacts, do it. But if not, pull up Netflix! Netflix will probably be more useful to you anyway, because it won’t just show you old tools or clothes behind glass cases out of context...it will show you how these things were used in everyday life.


How do you know when you’ve done enough research and you’re ready to begin writing? This is the ultimate question, and one I still haven’t figured out for myself yet. It’s different for every writer, and it might even be different for each project. My rule of thumb is if I’m capable of writing a full “day in the life” of a character, then I’m ready to begin my first draft. If you get to the point that you can write a full, average day in the life of any of your characters, from their morning routine to what they eat for breakfast to how they get to work, congratulations, you’re in great shape!


When Research Fails…


Sometimes you won’t be able to find the answer to a research question. Don’t fear...this is where your skills as a WRITER, not a historian, will come in handy. As a writer, you’re probably already a really good judge of human behavior and how people operate. Humans were still humans one hundred years ago, a thousand years ago, or even longer. Human behavior doesn’t change. People back then had the same basic desires as we do now; safety, nourishment, love, fulfillment, etc. Don’t stress! Take the knowledge you already have of the period, combine it with your knowledge of human behavior, and make your best educated guess. Then get back to the STORY. That’s the most important part, after all. We’re writers, not historians.


RELATE


To write gripping historical fiction, you need to be able to relate to your characters…so that your readers will be able to relate to them as well! My favorite part of historical fiction is getting into the mind of a character from long, long ago. This character’s life might be very different from mine. They might have very, very different ideas from me. But in the very best historical fiction, none of that matters. I feel everything along with the character. I almost feel like I am the character, regardless of our differences. Don’t forget to take your time developing your characters, just as you would a character from a contemporary novel. Your characters need to have dreams, memories, habits, fears…all human things that don’t change from year to year, era to era, all things that will allow your reader to relate to your characters and care about what happens to them.


RESPECT


Remember to be mindful of different attitudes or worldviews. I don’t believe basic human needs change from time or location, but human attitudes and worldviews can be very different depending on the environment people are brought up in. The very best historical fiction takes into account these key differences between people of the past and our own modern worldviews, while connecting us through those shared human desires. Take the differences you find in your research, combine them with the relatable human feelings you discover in your character work and